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Discussing Conflict after watching Nimona on #StoryChat episode 42!
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ALT Solid white background. On the bottom left there is the company logo for book light editorial, an open book with a lightbulb in the center. Two cartoon women in old-fashioned director outfits and berets sitting in director chairs while holding books and red pens in their hands. The woman on the left has curly blonde hair and glasses. The woman on the right has brown hair with green tips. Text reads: “If you think of your world and the antagonistic forces as a character, then you can see how they interplay with your main characters throughout the story. Having a strong external conflict gives your story a forward momentum…On episode ‘42’ of Story Chat Radio.”
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Ask yourself: would moving your characters to a different setting have any impact on the plot? If your answer is no, you need to do more worldbuilding!
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ALT The background is a solid dark blue color. The company logo (an open book with a lightbulb in the center that says Book Light Editorial) sits on the bottom left corner. On the top of the item there is a neon orange text that reads “Disclaimer”. The body of the text reads, “As always, general advice is complicated and hard. There are always exceptions and times when it isn’t applicable. This is why getting individual feedback can be so important. Remember: use the advice that works best for you and your writing!”
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Discussing Conflict after watching Amelie on #StoryChat episode 43!
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ALT On the top left there is the company logo for book light editorial, an open book with a lightbulb in the center. On the bottom center of the image are two cartoon women in old-fashioned director outfits and berets sitting in director chairs while holding books and red pens in their hands. The woman on the left has curly blonde hair and glasses. The woman on the right has brown hair with green tips. Text says,” The key really is voice. Make sure that whoever your omniscient narrator is, be it the author (you), a no-name character, a god, some sort of all-seeing entity, etc. that they have a distinct voice. They need a personality and voice that is not any of your characters. On Episode ‘43’ of Story Chat Radio”
ALT Dark blue solid background. Orange neon texts on the top that says,”Testimonials.” The company logo (an open book with a lightbulb in the center that says Book Light Editorial) sits on the bottom right corner. There is a white text box that says, Carly has completed two developmental edits for me within the past two years on two separate manuscripts. Both times I was impressed with not only the turn-around time, but how thorough her feedback was. She helped me see my projects from a reader's perspective but also offered advice on the marketability of it. Her enthusiasm for my work was met with a perfect balance of constructive criticism. While I had no doubt she's in my corner, she also wasn't afraid to challenge. Because of this, I'm able to put out the best work possible. Always a professional, she's also someone I can't wait to share a cuppa with someday.” -Lissa Carlino, Author of Woman Enough
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Discussing Heroine’s Journey after watching Guardians of the Galaxy on #StoryChat episode 39!
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ALT Dark blue solid background. Orange neon texts on the top that says,”Testimonials.” The company logo (an open book with a lightbulb in the center that says Book Light Editorial) sits on the bottom right corner. The cover of Bloodflower sits to the right of the body text. The body text says, “I’d been building and writing my story for more than a decade, and no matter how I revised, I couldn’t seem to make the story stand on its own feet. Then I handed it to Carly, who like me has a passion for nexus where fantasy, science fiction and romance collide. With one read she saw the ehart of the story I was trying to tell and helped me scrape away all the extraneous nonsense that didn’t belong. Carly’s insight into storytelling, how to lean into a writer’s voice, and the social issues that can make or break a story was invaluable. She helped uncover the light in my characters, leverage the characters as their own worst enemies, and breathe life into a complex tale that breaks the laws of physi
Setting is just where your story takes place: a location. Worldbuilding is understanding why your setting matters to the story you’re trying to tell
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ALT The background is a solid dark blue color. The company logo (an open book with a lightbulb in the center that says Book Light Editorial) sits on the bottom left corner. On the top of the item there is a neon orange text that reads “Disclaimer”. The body of the text reads, “As always, general advice is complicated and hard. There are always exceptions and times when it isn’t applicable. This is why getting individual feedback can be so important. Remember: use the advice that works best for you and your writing!”
Join me and other authors today at 3pm ET for a brainstorming zoom session!
Learn more on the #RevPit Subreddit where we're doing all sorts of activities to help authors with our new 6 week event: Fall into Fiction.
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Writing is hard! I think we all know this. Join me and other authors on 10/30 at 3pm ET for a brainstorming zoom session.
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Discussing romance beats after watching Bros on #StoryChat episode 37!
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ALT Solid white background. On the bottom left there is the company logo for book light editorial, an open book with a lightbulb in the center. Two cartoon women in old-fashioned director outfits and berets sitting in director chairs while holding books and red pens in their hands. The woman on the left has curly blonde hair and glasses. The woman on the right has brown hair with green tips. Text reads: “Romance structure, or romance beats, are very unique to the genre. They are honestly a perfect formula for making the romantic journey compelling. But most importantly, they make the relationship feel earned.”
ALT Dark blue solid background. Orange neon texts on the top that says,”Testimonials.” The company logo (an open book with a lightbulb in the center that says Book Light Editorial) sits on the bottom right corner. There is a smaller white text box that says, “I've been lucky to work with several editors who've improved my books and made me a better writer. I appreciate Carly's style. The feedback is concise and easy to understand. Her willingness to discuss not just this first book but where I'm going in the series is a great help, the kind of support I need as I try something new.” -Cheryl Harper, USA Today best-selling author of Can't Help Falling in Love and Least Likely to Fall in Love”