We’re getting ready to revise our single paragraphs on the refugee journey using
@TheWritingRevol Hochman Method.
First, I didn’t realize what I didn’t know about the distinction between revising and editing 🤯—a total paradigm shift for me.
Next, I’m prepping students for revision by marking their rough drafts where they’ll add appositives and expand “kernel-ish” sentences with essential detail. This is where the sentence-level instruction I’ve been doing is really going to pay off.