Rather late in the day for @TopTweetTuesday and @MatthewMCSmith I’m posting a quick first draft of a response to a Wallace Stevens poem. No idea if it’s on point or way off the mark but giving it a go anyway. Thanks as ever to Matt.
After reading The Mountain by Elizabeth Bishop, I wrote this piece called Weirs Fall Over Themselves... I might have been reading Is A River Alive? by Robert MacFarlane, too. This is my @TopTweetTuesday for @MatthewMCSmith and @blackboughpoems
ALT Poem
You donder along, pointing out dippers
and the barn door open wings of herons.
You never see the entirety of me.
Weirs fall over themselves to
feel the length of me over and over.
The length of me,
insinuation, suggestion,
so you might hunt for more
than a fleeting touch.
I have to turn, come
doubling back on myself
until i’m an oxbow bend
for you to recognise me,
for you to see me as alive.
Daniel Duggan
My poem this week is an after-after poem, influenced by both Elizabeth Bishop & Aus poet Ivan Smith. This is a WIP & an anthem to Aus wildlife in their struggle to survive the extreme firestorms of climate change. Many thanks to @MatthewMCSmith@blackboughpoems@TopTweetTuesday
ALT Death of a Koala
- after Elizabeth Bishop’s “The Armadillo”
and Ivan Smith’s Death of a Wombat
Hennaed ribbons lash treetops,
shake loose starry-embers.
The forest shimmers.
Koala chews a fragrant leaf,
nose crinkling.
Popping gumtrees torch the ridge.
Kangaroos vault through inferno,
falling like red ghosts.
Ground rises in marmalade-haze.
Terror animates drugged limbs.
Paw-pads burn on glowing bark.
Koala cries, small bellows
like a didgeridoo;
voice, ancient as this land.
Trees explode like Roman candles.
She spots a burrow, refuge
from eucalypts toppling like soldiers,
black and hollowed out;
the ghastly stillness
of feathereds, climbers, creepers.
Underground, a body huddles close.
Wombat keeps vigil until muted mewls
go silent. Koala sleeps,
dreaming of gum leaves.
– Gayle J. Greenlea
For @TopTweetTuesday here’s my poem, after Wallace Stevens’ Infanta Marina (with two words borrowed from a generous comment on my piece last week by the excellent @hool415 : jackdaw, and linchpin ☺️💫) Thank you @MatthewMCSmith@blackboughpoems Art by me 🎨🖌️
@TopTweetTuesday Wth thanks, as always to @MatthewMCSmith and @blackboughpoems
This week, a Stevens-adjacent piece influenced in part by ‘The River of Rivers in Connecticut’ - though, filtered by my limited precincts of poetry, trout streams and beef farmers.
#poetry#micropoem
ALT A Long, Quick Death
I die out of an expanse of Space.
It is distant, it is cold.
Beside the bright taper of a constellation
there are no homes, workplaces,
worship sites revealed like black waymarkers.
out of the weight of comets and asteroids,
till Space did nothing,
her absence not touching the imagined
foundations of homes.
Softly her feet withdrew,
and fetched me in.
A Short, Slow Life
We lived in a pocket of Time.
It was close, it was warm.
Along the dark seam of the river
the houses, the barns, the two churches,
hid like white crumbs
in a fluff of gray willows & elms,
till Time made one of his gestures;
his nails scratched the shingled roof.
Roughly his hand reached in,
and tumbled us out.
This Wednesday 10th June, you are cordially invited to the online Zoom launch of ‘Shored Fragments’.
Get booking, get inspired by our poems
in response to Eliot’s The Waste Land.
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This week’s challenge is to write a poem
influenced by another writer (one you didn’t choose in the previous 2 weeks). You have three choices:
- Elizabeth Bishop
- Wallace Stevens
- William Carlos Williams
100 words max, imagistic.
Don’t choose the same one!
Next week’s challenge is to write a poem
influenced by another writer (one you didn’t choose this week). You have three choices:
- Elizabeth Bishop
- Wallace Stevens
- William Carlos Williams
100 words max, imagistic.
Don’t choose the same one!
For this week’s @TopTweetTuesday , I’ve tried to echo a bit of Wallace Stevens and his sometimes luxurious imagery, so here is The Gilded Pebble. Thank you, @MatthewMCSmith for your luxurious feedback. I know this is still 96% me. 😄🌿
For @TopTweetTuesday@blackboughpoems,Backseat Driver is my offering. I'm trying for Wallace Stevens but who knows? I feel that a different 'spirit' took over my writing. U shall be the judge! TY all for reading commenting, especially @MatthewMCSmith for this venue&support
ALT Hide Out
The house holds its breath.
The five grandchildren are all here.
I'm anchored in the conservatory,
reckoning in the lynchpin sun
while catching a few rays
in my grey-beige rattan chair
I've been unpacking a box
of random memories.
They sneak into dusty shadows
scattered in four bunches.
I am hungry
to rediscover my life.
Three, two… one.
Here I come !
Ready or not !
Nothing moves.
A heightened awareness.
The house holds its breath.
Ian Richardson June 2026