AI writing is abominable, here's a regeneration of a real blog I found
The em dash used to be a sign of AI writing but for some reason it's now way way worse
Here's a teardown of this blog
1⃣ The title starts with a figure of speech - Antithesis: when humans write, it's typically one coherent strand in a title and rarely with such rhetorical fluorish. The two full stops are also a dead giveaway
2⃣Short sentences: if you want to know how odd this is, read out the first 2 lines (4 sentences) out loud. The left panel squeezes 52 words into 9 sentences with the shortest sentence having just one word. A natural writing style comes close to speaking cadence and combines sentences into paragraphs that support the main point.
3⃣Three clipped words (Tricolon) where one smooth sentence would do. And the main message in the staccato construction serves to emphasise the point made in previous sentence.
4⃣Negative parallelism: this short section of three sentences packs four different figures of speech. The main one is negative parallelism, two short sentences containing ‘never’ then dropping the word to deliver the punch line ‘judgement’. Tricolon, Anaphora and Asyndeton are also squeezed in
Simply amazing!
5⃣The chain: the last word of one sentence becomes the first of the next, so each line seems to follow from the one before.
In isolation, each of these figures of speech may sound smart and lends the author authority.
Stacked tightly as it is in the full writing, you can’t avoid a feeling of deception.
As a reader, I get the sense that the “author” could not bother to write with their own character, experience and distinct style.
If they’ve fully delegated writing to a robot, then there’s not likely to be any value in reading it. I could just go generate the same thing on my own