I like the sustained metaphor ππ
Do I sense mainly 'Regret'? ... perhaps mixed with a little feel-good 'Vent-Rant'?
Regardless, a nice ditty micro of 'Self-Awareness'.
Greetings@blackboughpoems and
@MatthewMCSmith
for Friday's event #fragmentsfriday.
Many thanks for your positive energy devoted to the world of poetry.