Youโre missing a D on and. And you donโt have to capitalize the first letter in each word in a sentence. Maybe a few less of these !!!!!!!!!. And a couple commas. And people might take you serious.
Quickest way to kill your writing โ even if itโs good, which this is not โ is to pack it so full of unnecessary commas that it actually physically constipates the reader.
Respectfully, I disagree. The Mail outright stated @Cal_III was a โhardened neo-Naziโ.
No source, no qualification, no โhe has been described asโ, just a straight assertion in inverted commas.
Unless Iโve missed something considerable, thatโs a smear.
Alt text: screenshot from BBC news website, headline is "assisted dying returns to parliament as MP urges peers to "finish the job"".
"Finish the job" is in inverted commas.