if i was you id add some kills at the start and then some ec instead of only ec, first trans isnt synced its too quick, trans at 0:10s dont use that for normal transitions its only used after main impacts or warps, and the surf witch clip buildup velo is too quick and zoom out is ass afterwars, clip at 0:12-13s dont use that buildup its only used for warp impact, clip at 0:14s change that into the warp impact with teh buildup u used before and u forgot the beatshake after the trans 0:16s velo buildup too quick, and the orefire clip buildup velo is too slow (its on 50% for too long), and dont add the win impact on random clips and the whole ident part doesnt fit the flow, and the ient bg has too much radial blur, 0:22s dont use that buildup and impact it doesnt match,, js use normal, 0:24s dont use rverse velo for bn and especially not on dissolve luma, the flow for the next liek 3-4 clips is bad, u can keep the sike part though, 0:29s once again dont use that film burn transition only use on main impacts, win impact on 0:31s doesnt make any sense flow wise, same with the trans, 0:33s change the buildup and the impact glint is ass, remive it and add a light leak, trans at 0:34s is nice idea but do smth good and tweak smth dont js use the ident bg for that, and last clip should should be win impact. ngl almost all ur velo is bad on this edit