This review of Paul Scott Grill's (
@plainrunner2 ) "Travel by Star" should be up at Amazon soon. 5/5 there.
Paul Scott Grill's debut novel is a veritable feast of a Christian fantasy, serving up tantalizing prose that enchants a simple but rich plot with layers of depth. This is spiritual speculative fiction as it should be--subtle and significant. Quite simply, this indie Western-fantasy is one of the very best fantasies I have read.
The two main characters are beautifully crafted. Travel, a sharp-shooting cowboy is hired to accompany a mysterious young woman, simultaneously powerful and vulnerable, to a forgotten city. There is some delightful symbolism and play within the story on Travel's name that adds to the novel's pilgrim-theme. Not only do the two wayfarers face a host of enemies and entities on their journey, they are also pursued by a tortured and formidable villain.
The book earns trust within the first few chapters, calling for an emotional and spiritual investment. It created an interesting dynamic for this reader wherein there was a yearning and rooting not only for the characters, but for the story to fulfill the vows it was making. It did not disappoint. While the ending was not quite perfect (more below), it was very well done and satisfying with both its twists and its expectations.
The frequent flashbacks, usually unmarked as to their chronology, were initially disorienting, but together with the alluring prose, it quickly knit together into an enchanting whole that felt ethereal and became an asset rather than an obstacle. More than any other fantasy I can remember, the story breathes with an almost Narnian atmosphere.
Their is a craftsmanship to the writing in "Travel by Star" that is superlative. Grill is comfortable and effective writing fast-paced action, but really enters his element in more poignant scenes. Chapter 15 is five pages of some of the best writing I can remember and was gut-wrenchingly beautiful in spite of it being related to a minor sub-plot.
A few enjoyable surprises that stood out were the increasing significance of what seemed like a heroic but minor character who turns out to be very powerful, and a defeat of the villain mid-way in the book that left me cheering, but somehow left the mystique and menace of the villain intact--a difficult task done well.
The world-building is appropriate to the story and enjoyable in its accretive fashion which suits its dream-like form. A few (very small) criticisms include the need for a better map, some editing issues, and a cover that better suits the fantasy genre. The cover currently reads as "Western," but as a fantasy reader with little interest in Westerns, it almost kept me from opening the book, in spite of the praise I had heard of it and the fact that it was sitting on my bookshelf.
All in all, this will now be my foremost recommendation for a Christian fantasy, unseating my previous favorite. Aside from Tolkien, of course.
*Spoiler*
A few words about the story's ending may be appropriate. By the time it comes, the investment in characters and their journey is significant. It is an adventure, but no mere adventure and I found myself constantly wondering if the author was going to be able to land this beautiful craft he had built and guide it successfully into port. The answer: yes, but maybe not perfectly.
At the end, each of the three major characters end up tangling with the villain, with the young woman experiencing a resurrection and together with Travel, finally vanquishing him. The resurrection/recovery works very well and was satisfying, coming after Travel's realization/conversion. What was less satisfying was the end of the pursuing champion whose victory over the villain, but seemingly insignificant death afterwards, seemed to undermine his pursuit, which was ostensibly to save the girl. In the end he neither saved her through his death nor killed the villain, either of which would, in my opinion, have been a better outcome for this beloved minor-to-major character.
The other slight-miss was Travel's vision of the historic death of Christ upon another planet. In a story that had otherwise beautifully balanced a Christian ethos with subtlety, it seemed not only too revealing, but also jarring. I have no problem with gospel clarity in fiction, but the story seemed to step out of its own mythos in that moment.
The big twist at the end, however, was the reality of the city and its relevance to Travel. And this was beautifully done and it dripped with the full significance of the theme of conversion.